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serike

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on: Jul 15, 2018
How could you revise the following sentence to make it stronger? My son is the apple of my
  eye.
 
  a. Revise it so it is grammatically correct.
  b. Remove the clichd phrase apple of my eye.
  c. Make the clichd phrase apple of my eye more specific.
  d. Add additional detail.
  e. No revision is needed.

Question 2

The waiter left room for displacement of the ice cubes while serving the guests their beverages in the golden goblets.
 
  A) weight of fluid shifted by range B) weight or volume of fluid shifted by a solid
  C) weight of fluid shifted by volume D) weight of fluid shifted by the homeless


juicepod

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Reply #1 on: Jul 15, 2018
Answer to Question 1

b

Answer to Question 2

B


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