Which sentence is correctly punctuated? A) Our marketing manager ...

[cabate]

Which sentence is correctly punctuated?
 A) Our marketing manager is concerned with the financing and the delivery and the installation of our product.
 B) Our marketing manager is concerned with the financing, and the delivery, and the installation of our product.
 C) Our marketing manager is concerned with the financing, and the delivery and the installation of our product.

Question 2

What should you remember about using pronouns in business reports?

[johnharpe]

Answer to Question 1

A

Answer to Question 2

First- and second-person pronouns should be avoided; only third-person pronouns are acceptable in formal business reports. The report should focus on the information, not on the writer. Also avoid using he as a generic pronoun when referring to an unidentified person.

[cabate]

Thanks for the timely response, appreciate it

[xiazhe]

Excellent