Identify the supporting detail that does not support the ...

[j.rubin]

Identify the supporting detail that does not support the following topic sentence: Wild
  animals can use tools in clever and innovative ways.
 
  a. Jane Goodall observed chimpanzees pick and trim long blades of grass, which they then
  poked into termite mounds to retrieve the tasty insects.
  b. Jane Goodall is considered the world's expert on chimpanzee behavior.
  c. Because the tasty ostrich egg has a shell too tough for them to peck open, Egyptian vultures
  have learned to throw rocks at the egg to crack it open.
  d. Orangutans braid vines together to make a stronger rope.

Question 2

What is the targeting technique of proofreading?
 
  What will be an ideal response?

[Viet Thy]

Answer to Question 1

b. Jane Goodall is considered the world's expert on chimpanzee behavior.

Answer to Question 2

additional proofreading to look for favorite or most frequent errors

[j.rubin]

TYSM

[peter]

Thanks for the timely response, appreciate it