INSTRUCTIONS: Carefully read the following thesis sentences. Some ...

[student77]

INSTRUCTIONS: Carefully read the following thesis sentences. Some of the coordinate ideas are faulty because they overlap (have almost the same meaning) or are not coordinate (equal). Cross out the overlapping or uncoordinate idea. Besides watching the baseball game, attending a professional game means being able to buy all kinds of food, purchase souvenirs, watch batting practice, and eat peanuts.
 
  What will be an ideal response?

Question 2

INSTRUCTIONS: Carefully read the following thesis sentences. Some of the coordinate ideas are faulty because they overlap (have almost the same meaning) or are not coordinate (equal). Cross out the overlapping or uncoordinate idea. Before buying a computer, people should consider personal needs, expenses, available software, computer capabilities, and costs.
 
  What will be an ideal response?

[Ksh22]

Answer to Question 1

Besides watching the baseball game, attending a professional game means being able to buy all kinds of food, purchase souvenirs, and watch batting practice, and eat peanuts.

Answer to Question 2

Before buying a computer, people should consider personal needs, expenses, available software, and computer capabilities, and costs.

Before buying a computer, people should consider personal needs, expenses, available software, computer capabilities, and costs.

[student77]

YES! Correct, THANKS for helping me on my review

[aliotak]

Excellent