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beccaep

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on: Jul 15, 2018
The sentence, Our vacation in Colorado was the best vacation we have had in a long time, should be revised because it
 
  a. contains sexist language.
  b. is redundant.
  c. contains a clich.
  d. uses nonstandard English.

Question 2

The best time to evaluate and revise a thesis statement is
 
  a. after you have generated a list of topics.
  b. before you have finished a first draft.
  c. after you have written a first draft.
  d. after you have completed a final draft.


rosiehomeworddo

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Reply #1 on: Jul 15, 2018
Answer to Question 1

b

Answer to Question 2

c


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