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jessicacav

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How could you revise the following sentence for clarity? Shelia found the dog in the street
  cold and shaking.
 
  a. Shelia found the cold and shaking dog in the street.
  b. Shelia, cold and shaking, found the dog in the street.
  c. Shelia found the dog in the cold and shaking street.
  d. Cold and shaking, Shelia found the dog in the street.
  e. The modifiers are clear.

Question 2

Janelle's instructor asked her to narrow the topic music, but she is having difficulty
  completing the task. What suggestion would you give her?
 
  a. Focus on an aspect of the topic she finds interesting.
  b. Focus on an aspect of the topic her audience will find interesting.
  c. Focus on her purpose for writing.
  d. Focus on the number of pages she will have to write.
  e. Focus on the qualities her writing should include.
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Answer to Question 1

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Answer to Question 2

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