Mental distance from a rough draft can be achieved by a) ...

[NguyenJ]

Mental distance from a rough draft can be achieved by
 
  a) waiting 24 hours before revising.
  b) revising in a different place from where you wrote the rough draft.
  c) not sharing your draft until you have finished your revisions.
  d) using a computer spell-check and grammar-check.

Question 2

In the following paragraph, what methods does the writer use to achieve coherence?
  Biosphere II in southern Arizona was built as a self-sustaining ecosysteman
  experiment that would have implications for such structures should humans try to colonize
  the moon or Mars. On September 26, 1991, eight people entered Biosphere II for a two-year
  mission to see if humans could survive in a totally contained, self-sustaining environment.
  Three weeks into the experiment, one crew member had an accident with a rice threshing
  machine that severed the tip of her finger. She left the Biosphere for five hours in order to be
  treated by a specialist. By April of 1992, the Biospherians had lost significant weight because
  food production was lower than expected. Their health also suffered because oxygen levels in
  Biosphere II began dipping to dangerously low levels. In January 1993 more oxygen was
  added, a move many considered another indication of the mission's failure.
 
  Despite these
  setbacks and their growing hostility towards each other, the Biospherians remained in the
  enclosure until September 26, 1993.
  a. chronological organization, transitions, repetition of key words, and pronoun reference
  b. emphatic organization, transitions, repetition of key words, and synonyms
  c. chronological organization, repetition of key words, synonyms, and pronoun reference
  d. spatial organization, transitions, repetition of key words, and pronoun reference

[dmurph1496]

Answer to Question 1

a

Answer to Question 2

a. chronological organization, transitions, repetition of key words, and pronoun reference

[NguyenJ]

YES! Correct, THANKS for helping me on my review

[jordangronback]

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