Which of the following would not make a good conclusion? a) ...

[maychende]

Which of the following would not make a good conclusion?
 
  a) Not only will mentoring benefit children in all these ways, it will make you feel good as well.
  b) As my thesis stated, mentoring helps children academically, socially and emotionally.
  c) Try to find one hour this week to begin mentoring a child.
  d) If you don't do it, who will?

Question 2

Where does the thesis statement of an essay usually appear?
 
  What will be an ideal response?

[Mollythedog]

Answer to Question 1

b

Answer to Question 2

at the end of the introduction

[maychende]

Excellent

[rachel]

Thanks for the timely response, appreciate it