Author Question: Carmen wrote the following sentence: It is important that each employee provide his RSVP for the ... (Read 15 times)

piesebel

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Carmen wrote the following sentence: It is important that each employee provide his RSVP
  for the company picnic. How can she revise her sentence to make it stronger?
 
  a. Replace his with a pronoun that is more specific.
  b. Revise so there is no pronoun shift.
  c. Revise so the subject is not repeated.
  d Replace his with an indefinite pronoun.
  e. Replace his with his or her so the pronoun and antecedent agree in number.

Question 2

The sentence, Everyone will be required to submit their paper at 9:00 a.m., is incorrect because the pronoun is
  not consistent in person.
 
  Indicate whether the statement is true or false



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Answer to Question 1

e

Answer to Question 2

TRUE



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