After rereading his paragraph, Carl decides to revise the sentence, It is always fun, to read
Riding roller coasters is always fun. Carl has revised for
a. style.
b. adequate support.
c. unity.
d. organization.
e. errors.
Question 2
What is wrong with the following sentence? Although many people love ice cream.
a. It uses an incorrect transitional word.
b. It expresses an incomplete thought.
c. It assumes that many people love ice cream.
d. It is not punctuated correctly.
e. Nothing. The sentence is correct.