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tuffie

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on: Jul 15, 2018
Jin writes a paragraph that attempts to persuade his audience to vote in the upcoming election,
  but his teacher says it lacks the details needed to make a strong point. Jin should revise his paragraph for
 
  a. coherence.
  b. unity.
  c. adequate support.
  d. style.
  e. organization.

Question 2

Xavier begins writing a paragraph with the topic sentence, Text messaging while driving
  should be banned in every state. Halfway through his paragraph, he realizes he has strayed from his original idea and begun talking about how fun text messaging is. To revise his paragraph for unity, Xavier should
 
  a. change the topic sentence.
  b. write a strong concluding sentence.
  c. use transitions to connect ideas.
  d. remove any sentences that do not relate to the main idea.
  e. write additional supporting sentences.


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tuwy

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Reply #1 on: Jul 15, 2018
Answer to Question 1

c

Answer to Question 2

d


tuffie

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Reply 2 on: Jul 15, 2018
:D TYSM

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Gracias!

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