help with a thesis statement for Romeo and Juliet?

[aero]

i have to write a paper on the balcony scene, and how manifestation of their love, and the obstacles to their love. so far i have:
in the playwright, Romeo and Juliet, by William Shakespeare, manifestation of Romeo and Juliet's love is shown in Romeo's willingness to sacrifice, and Juliet's honesty and sincerity.

i need to make it much better. please help!

[Jesse_J]

I think this exceeds my knowledge on shakespeare. I had a friend who read shakespear and alike ..he was a rather intellectual person..a wise one.. and I am sure he is out there somewhere trolling on girls instead of trying to be handy trying to help you and alike out in a thoughtful manner.

[hummingbird]

My teacher Loved my work for Romeo and Juliet, Ill help you,
to make it better say:
In the playwright, Romeo and Juliet, by William Shakespeare, manifestation of Romeo's and Juliet's love is shown in willingness to sacrifice, and Juliet's honesty and sincerity for her view on life and life's creation. Together it is Romeo's and Juliet's love and sacrafices that they made for each other that leads the story to its creative idea of their passion for each other.