Trevon's essay about school uniforms does not have enough details ...

[sammy]

Trevon's essay about school uniforms does not have enough details and examples to be
  convincing. Trevon should revise for
 
  a. unity.
  b. coherence.
  c. logic.
  d. adequate support.
  e. grammar.

Question 2

Maya wants to write a paragraph narrating her recent trip to China. After writing her topic
  sentence, she asks herself the following questions: About whom is the paragraph? What happened? When did it happen? Where did it happen? Why did it happen? How did it happen? How will answering these questions improve Maya's paragraph?
 
  a. It will ensure that she has a clear topic sentence.
  b. It will help her write her concluding sentence.
  c. It will ensure that she remembers all the details of her trip.
  d. It will ensure that her paragraph is as complete as possible.
  e. It will help her decide how to organize her paragraph.

[Loise Hard]

Answer to Question 1

d

Answer to Question 2

d

[sammy]

Thanks for the timely response, appreciate it

[fatboyy09]

YES! Correct, THANKS for helping me on my review