Author Question: Unprofessional Thank-you Message for an Interview After a job interview, a written message of ... (Read 56 times)

s.tung · **on:** Jun 23, 2018

Unprofessional Thank-you Message for an Interview After a job interview, a written message of appreciation shows professional courtesy and helps the interviewer remember you. Even if you don't want the job, interviewers may forward your resume to others who may be seeking applicants. Stephanie has interviewed with a company that has communicated with her exclusively by email. She sends the following thank-you message via email as a follow up to her interview. To: TrjenkinsTristate.c om From: sillygirlhotmail.co m Subject: thanks :-) Chuck, I just wanted to send a quick thanx for the interview yesterday. I think we had a good chat and that you now know a little about me. It was great to meet all the neat people at your place and I think I would fit in real well with everyone. I have a lot to offer and I'm a hard worker. I'd like to hear from you ASAP as to whether or not I got the job. If I haven't heard from you by next week, I'll check in with you. I'd like to wrap things up with you guys or move along to some other job possibilities. I'm sure you understand that. Steph Required: Rewrite this unprofessional thank-you message for a job interview.

Question 2

For an unsolicited report, the
a. writer should include authorization and acceptance messages.
b. writer should omit a transmittal message.
c. title pageshould omit the report subject.
d. transmittal message should state why the report was written.

ashely1112 · **Reply #1 on:** Jun 23, 2018

Answer to Question 1

To: om class=bbc_email>TrjenkinsTristate.c om
From: m class=bbc_email>slferrellhotmail.co m
Subject: Appreciation for job interview

Dear Mr. Bradley

Thank you for the opportunity to visit Tristate for a job interview yesterday. I enjoyed meeting you and appreciated the opportunity to learn about your company's new products and expanding markets.

Tristate's success in developing high quality products and expanding markets is certainly impressive. I was also impressed with the friendly, competent employees who were so willing to take time to meet with me.

After visiting your company, I am certain that my previous work experience would allow me to contribute to Tristate's product development efforts. With my recent degree in marketing and real-world experiences from marketing internships, I could significantly contribute to the company.

Mr. Bradley, I am eager to receive an offer from Tristate for the position in your marketing department. If you need additional information, please contact me.

Thanks,

Stephanie Ferrell

Answer to Question 2

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