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bclement10

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Rewrite the following sentence to avoid camouflaged verbs: The customer will ultimately make a determination about whether a purchase will occur.
 
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Explain the steps involved in editing documents for clarity.
 
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Reply #1 on: Jun 24, 2018
Answer to Question 1

Answer: The customer will ultimately decide whether to purchase.

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Answer: Editing for clarity involves breaking up overly long sentences and rewriting sentences that contain hedging (words such as may and seems). It also requires imposing parallelism, or using the same grammatical pattern to express two or more similar ideas. Correcting dangling modifiers is another necessary step, along with rewording long noun sequences. Improving the clarity of a document also involves eliminating camouflaged verbs, clarifying sentence structure and awkward sentences, and moderating your enthusiasm.


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Reply 2 on: Jun 24, 2018
YES! Correct, THANKS for helping me on my review

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Great answer, keep it coming :)

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