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casperchen82

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Jason wrote the following comment on his classmate's paper: This paragraph doesn't make
  sense. A more constructive comment would be
 
  a. This paragraph is disorganized.
  b. Your topic sentence needs a controlling idea.
  c. Your writing is a bit confusing.
  d. The examples given are dull.
  e. This paragraph is incomplete.

Question 2

Casanova rereads his paragraph to look for mistakes in grammar, punctuation, mechanics,
  and spelling. He is
 
  a. revising for organization.
  b. revising for style.
  c. revising for unity.
  d. editing for errors.
  e. revising for adequate support.


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Reply #1 on: Jul 15, 2018
Answer to Question 1

b

Answer to Question 2

d


casperchen82

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Reply 2 on: Jul 15, 2018
Excellent

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Great answer, keep it coming :)

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