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misspop

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on: Jul 15, 2018
Which of these has faulty parallelism?
 
  a. The huge park was sparkling with noise and excitement from so many people that it seemed like the whole of St. Louis was there.
  b. The park swirled with a mix of laughter, screams from people on the rides, it seemed as if the whole of St. Louis was there.

Question 2

Which of these contains a fragment?
 
  a. Saturday was beautiful. With a cool breeze and exciting fall colors.
  b. With a cool breeze and exciting fall colors, Saturday was so beautiful.
  c. Saturday, with a cool breeze and exciting fall colors, was beautiful.


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mtmmmmmk

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Reply #1 on: Jul 15, 2018
Answer to Question 1

B

Answer to Question 2

A


misspop

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Reply 2 on: Jul 15, 2018
Thanks for the timely response, appreciate it

bulacsom

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Great answer, keep it coming :)

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